This entry was posted on September 13, 2011 by kdanil009. It was filed under Uncategorized .
You have put in a lot of effort in designing your space. I think your project needs refinement. Not to worry it comes only with time and experience.
Architect – West indies
September 14, 2011 at 11:43 pm
September 18, 2011 at 7:18 am
Your project needs a lot of work. I would suggest you to go back to your precedents and study them in detail. I think your project could benefit a lot from modularity just like your study 1 and the ergonomics example. I like the curve element that has been drawn in the very latest dwg may be you should take that as a module and see how it behaves on repetition. Also the stair sketch in sheet 09 at the right bottom has something nice about it see how that could be developed as your project.
The negative at the moment are you have a lot going on so it might be helpful to focus on the part you like the most and see how that could govern your project. Another thing that you can benefit from is a good model, to me it seems you haven’t put much effort into your model.
Wish you good luck with the project i would love to see how you grow from this point.
Ar. Jasmeet Kahlon
September 17, 2011 at 1:15 am
Thank you for the comment and critique
September 18, 2011 at 7:19 am
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